Pretty good
When it got into it, it was pretty cool. Very cool. The vocal part was actually kinda cool too, and it broke into the main part well. Tell you what though, the piano melody was boring as shit. But I see from your comments that your keyboard broke, so you're probably aware of that.
The last note, the low one, would sound way better if it was E instead of C. And the chord played before that sounds like it is C and E. B and E would make a better chord.