The-iMortal's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Rush]

Awesome!

ChasingPresence responds:

:DD

[Imprisoned]

Cool stuff!

ChasingPresence responds:

thanks bro :D

[-Orr- 2012 DEMO REEL]

Great work. Nuff said.

Or is not nuff said to get a response? Hmmm...

DavidOrr responds:

Now that Newgrounds has the forum/review tracker, it makes it really easy to see new reviews and respond. So, to answer your question, it was enough to get a response :)

[Raving in the Rain]

Sick! I absolutely love the melodies in the breakdown.

I like the build up and the pre-build up. Only thing I really suggest is to take off a lot of reverb on that piano in the beginning.

ChasingPresence responds:

Well thank you :)

[Edge of Time]

ARGH! I went to click on the side of the page, and accidentally voted 0! I'll vote 5 tomorrow!

A very good composition. Personally, I would have liked the percussion to be more powerful. The light drums weaken the impact at times.

Still, good work! :)

stunkel responds:

D: It's cool dude, it didn't go down that much. Thanks for reviewing though!

[So I tried "singing"]

When you were singing lyrics, your voice sounded good! The whole moaning thing didn't really do much for me though. Probs a bit too much reverb on the voice and some stronger compression on the vocals would've gone alright. The moaning stuck out a bit at times.

DJ-Babokon responds:

Thank you!

[Christe Redemptor Omnium]

I like your approach to the season! Track is pretty good too. Reason I don't give 5 stars is coz I think the mixing could have been improved :)

bassfiddlejones responds:

Thank you for the review! I like my approach as well :) lol. The mixing on this piece is pretty terrible, I hardly had any time to fix it (and my room is rather non-conducive to mixing). Looking to probably update it after contest stuffs are over.

[Azrei - Zero]

Not too good, man :(

I understand you worked hard on this song, but unfortunately, nothing about this track grabs me at all. The composition is lifeless and not very well structured. The mixing could do with some work too, but I really think you should concentrate more on the actual compositions for the moment!

Keep at it, and you'll get there! :)

Axel7 responds:

thanks man, I'll keep working

[Elegant Renaissance]

Forget about the mastering for now, concentrate on the mixing! The drums especially... they sound so dull, and fail to bring energy into the track. The synths sound like they've been recorded out of radio (okay, maybe not that extreme). It sounds like you've either cut too many frequencies with an EQ, or used distortion plugins unwisely.

The kick just does not bring in the oomph it needs to. Bring up the volume! The snare sound very lifeless - no body to it.

The composition is quite good, but your mixing needs serious work, bro. Coz I'm such a great bloke, if you want some help, PM me and I'll give you my Skype, and I can help you mix and master your next project. As in, I won't do it for you, but I'll give you tips and criticism.

GershBeats responds:

Cool, thanks for the review! I may take ya up on that :)

hehe I'm actually just looking at it now - I've got overdrive layered on the master track lololol

[atomsmasha - darknet]

Quality composition. Hard to judge sonical quality, obviously, but it's shaping up nicely. I could definitely hear that in a video game, or a bar, and perhaps in a club early in the night. Question: how do you find the labels you're going to contact? Beatport? Are you going to contact international labels? I'm curious as I will want to try to get signed once I believe I'm professional standard (or close to it).

Cheers.

jarrydn responds:

thanks for the review mate. if you're interested in checking out a full preview of the track, hit up my soundcloud: http://soundcloud.com/atomsmasha

as for labels, well thats a very complex question. i dont think i could properly answer it with a reply, so if you really want to pick my brains on this subject, send us a pm. i can't even really scratch at the surface without needing to get really in depth